HellBentVet's Journal, 29 Jan 17

Sorry I haven't been around, seems my drastic diet change made my body argue with me, we had a long two week discussion, and I finally convinced it this was going to happen, I won. But not before it gave me weeks of feeling sick, weak, worn and worthless. Again, in control I submit a new poem, from just this morning. Hope you have a wonderful day, and if you know what Twitch is online, follow me there, in creative I stream my work live. Find me using HellBentVet, respect.


The Walk

Lonely today
Feeling so empty, dull inside
Longing to share
The crisp morning
Until the warmth of day
Has driven the chill away
Walk with me, only for a moment
Or forever, if in my words
Should you feel at home
Out the door and onto a path
One to an imaginary painted forest
Tell me, do you know the one?
With silken lavender dancing treestars
Tenderly whispering each step of the way
Trees, their bark smooth, they give pause to nature
As if sanded, then painted by the hand of an skilled artist
In swaying long strokes, brushes hue the colors of grassy green rainbows
They tease at your senses, and capture the canvas with ease
Your body quakes ever so slightly, as your hand touches the surface
Reminding you the caress of a certain lover, many long memories ago
You sigh, as you give way to the feeling to rush, yet again to the feverish craving
One, truly you would have sworn, only an instant before, you had never missed
Suddenly you rise from the memory
Gift a thankful kiss upon my cheek
And run away giggling
As you leave me alone..

Smiling

©HellBentVet
1/29/2017
120.0 kg Lost so far: 8.3 kg.    Still to go: 24.8 kg.    Diet followed: Reasonably Well.
Losing 0.8 kg a Week

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Nice poem and glad you got through the diet detox period. It seems building up the microbiome in the gut-getting rid of the bacteria that thrive on sugar/flour/salt/oil/meat/dairy-and adding good bacteria that thrive on fruits/seeds/nuts/veggies/whole grains and lots of fiber gets rid of the nasty illness feeling often associated with big weight loss. Good luck as you move forward.  
29 Jan 17 by member: Selbygirl6
Thank you for your shares. 
29 Jan 17 by member: ClassicRocker
I love reading your thoughts...... 
31 Jan 17 by member: Char60

     
 

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